If you're a professional who buys services, please give me your opinion here:

In the lower right of my business card designs (in progress), I'm experimenting with at least two treatments showing my email and my web URL as one, to avoid listing the email and web URL separately. Because "colthart.com" is common to each, the redundancy bothers me. I'd like to avoid three blocks of type across the bottom and instead use only two.

Question - can I get away with either approach shown above? Or would a professional [prospect] be too put-off by my being too "clever?" Is this ambiguity distracting? Or are we a sufficiently evolved culture that this is a mere "twist" that's easy enough to comprehend?

Thanks in advance for your comment! I'd like to finish this up...